This took a while so enjoy I guess.
Monday 8 January 2018
Summer learning Journey week 3 day 4 Activity 1
Out of the gate and off for a walk went Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Dairy. Heads to the school and sneaks the berries. Then Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy and the school with the berries heads to the library to visit Miss Larry. And Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy,the school with the berries and the visit to Miss Larry head to Nastazia's bakery. Where Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy,the school with the berries,the library to visit Miss Larry and Nastazia's bakery. Head to Demis Factory and had a look around. Then Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Dairy,the school with the berries,the visit to Miss Larry,Nastazia's bakery and Demis factory. Then Hairy Maclary made his way to dog park then made some trouble with ducks. So Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Dairy,the school with the berries,the visit to Miss Larry,Nastazia's bakery and Demis factory. Went back home and had a nice sleep.
This took a while so enjoy I guess.
This took a while so enjoy I guess.
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3 comments:
hey Jolie
Outstanding piece of writing.. It was very interesting. It just flowed. How did you come up with such ideas??
Kia Ora Vedel
Thank you for your comment, I came up with them by remembering my old Hairy Maclary book. Then I came up with names and places. Have a great holiday :)
Hi Jolie!
My name is Ellee, I am another part of the Summer Learning Journey Crew that is commenting on your blogs this summer.
Looks like you have been super busy completing your activities this summer, awesome work!
I really enjoyed reading your story that you have created for Hairy Maclary. I liked that you were able to find a formula to work from that keeps the reader in suspense until the end.
Did you read Hairy Maclary when you were younger?
I think it would be really hard to rhyme a whole story - do you think you could do it?
....Maybe on a new adventure for Hairy Maclary? :)
Hope you enjoy the rest of your school holidays Jolie, keep up the hard work on your blog!
Ellee :)
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