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I have chosen a Acrostic poem.
Happy and safe
Tired and sore
excited and hungry grateful and lucky
I am a Year 8 student at Glen Innes School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Miss Donaldson.
6 comments:
HI Jolie
What an amazing poem.. My favourite bit was when you said "Excited and hungry, grateful and lucky." How long did it take you to make this poem???
Kia Ora Vedel
Thank you for your comment. I took me two minutes to make this poem.
Hey Jolie
I can really see the all of the hard work that you have put into this activity. I also am doing the summer learning journey on my blog. What was your favrioute part about this activity? Why?
Kia Ora Jolie,
That is a very creative poem. I reckon you are spot on with how someone would feel after such a scary and long flight across open water. What do you think the pilot would have felt when he saw Christchurch airport and was about to land?
I would be numb from being so scared but total relief. What do you think?
Cadence š
Hello Harrison
I appreciate your comment,my favourite part was coming up with the poem. The reason why is because I would like to tell people what my emotions would be if I came back from a very long trip. Have a great holiday :)
Kia Ora Cadence
Thank you for your comment, I think the pilot would of felt happy and tired. I would feel the same. Have a great holiday :)
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