Wednesday 12 July 2017
Winter Learning Journey Day 5 Activity 1
It was Freezing and I was scared I had no idea what was going to happen next. I started walking around and then I saw sun set. Every direction I looked it was either trees or a bunch of bushes. I built a tent knowing that I was going to be here until morning. I made a fire using some sticks that I found while walking around. As the sky faded into a dark blue I put my hands over the fire to keep myself warm. I go to sleep hoping that my group comes to find me. In the morning I woke up with a bunch of people in my face. When I sit up I realise that its my group, I was so happy to see all of them I thanked them for finding me and we went back home.
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8 comments:
Hi Jolie,
This piece of writing is so captivating! The first sentence I was hooked in I love it so much! I think you should keep writing stories like this!
Kia Ora Limi
Thank you! Im so happy to see someone like my writing. This took me a very long time to come up with. Once again thank you for the comment :)
Hi Jolie!
Nice job with your story! I could visualise everything going on in your story. Well done!
Nicky :)
Kia Ora Nicky
Thank you for youre nice comment. I am happy that you could visualise every moment I tried my best to make sure that the reader could make a picture in their head when they are reading my story. Thank you again. Have a great holiday :)
Jolie
Hey Jolie,
Your hard wrk paid off then!
Nicky :)
Hi Jolie
Good job on this activity. Your story is pretty cool. I like how as soon as you woke up in the morning, your friends were in front of you. Well done.
Daniel
Kia Ora Daniel
Thank you for youre amazing comment :)
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