My brochure about the Omaru Creek - Te Taiao o Tāmaki.
Room 8 made a brochure. My message to the community is to not litter into the creek.
I think that we need a clean creek because then it will have more wildlife like.
Eels,Fish and ducks.
Kia Ora Jolie I am really impressed with your brochure, it looks better than mine. I have also done brochure based on the same topic as yours. It is our community individuals that are causing this chaos. How do you feel about people throwing their litter in the Omaru Creek?
Kia Ora Huntah thank you for youre comment. Your brochure is actually better than mine. I feel like our community has let us down because they just throw their rubbish into the Creek.
Hello Jolie It's Naomi from quad blogging, I really like your brochure, I remember when I made a brochure last year but did not print it out. your message would of been amazing because it was about pollution and I think that you would be good at writing about pollution.
Kia Ora Naomi Thank you for youre comment. I believe that if I saw youre brochure it would be better than mine. And thank you for saying ''your message would of been amazing because it was about pollution.
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Hi Jolie well done. Keep up the great work. Hope you have a good year. :D
Kia Ora Jolie
I am really impressed with your brochure, it looks better than mine. I have also done brochure based on the same topic as yours. It is our community individuals that are causing this chaos. How do you feel about people throwing their litter in the Omaru Creek?
Kia Ora Huntah
thank you for youre comment. Your brochure is actually better than mine. I feel like our community has let us down because they just throw their rubbish into the Creek.
Hello Jolie It's Naomi from quad blogging,
I really like your brochure, I remember when I made a brochure last year but did not print it out. your message would of been amazing because it was about pollution and I think that you would be good at writing about pollution.
Kia Ora Naomi
Thank you for youre comment. I believe that if I saw youre brochure it would be better than mine. And thank you for saying ''your message would of been amazing because it was about pollution.
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