Metaphor poem

WALT: write a metaphor poem

Jolie Tawhara is a small parcel

That’s wrapped with colorful words

And decorated with pretty flowers.                                           

Jolie Tawhara is a faded ferrari

Speeding on the motorway

And playing music as loud as a lion’s roar

Jolie Tawhara is a sad and lonely whale

Staying up late thinking

While calling and crying for friends.

Jolie Tawhara is the wind that can change directions  

within a blink of and eye

Jolie Tawhara is a beautiful rose

Standing alone

surrounded by trees and nature.  

Jolie Tawhara is giant panda that looks innocent and cuddly

But loves to eat and is really sassy.

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Today we were learning how to create a metaphor poem, by doing that we read poems that were created by other students and after that we learnt what to include when writing a metaphor poem.

CPS

WALT: solve word problems by using the best strategy we know

Global audience

What is a complex sentence.

Ear - bud art

What I like about Angel's art: I like how she put really vibrant colours and I also like how beautiful it is.


What I think Angel needs to work on: I think angel needs to work on finding the right size.

Collaborative mystery solving.

WALT: work collaboratively to solve a mystery.

This task was about a boy who was kidnapped so that he couldn't participate in his next football game. This was easy because I looked for all the clues and made inferences. I made this by myself and sadly didn't collaborate with anyone because I just listened to my group and didn't share. Next time I will ask to work in a group so that I will be able to collaborate.